Well, I’m not sure if I’m supposed to post but, I liked the opening. Definately reading this!

Pretty good start. I feel interested in the people, and looks like there's going to be some action to shake things up.

I think the redmen got off easy. They attacked a constable. But the one ben dropped his weight on probably got a broken rib cage, so, that.

I thought it was going to be a nice, easy chapter, but the action ramped up fast!

Me, settling down to see what this is all about!